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Claire Adderholt's avatar

this is a near-perfect, visceral line, contains a whole world -

A bead of sweat no greater than/

a seed adrift in no man’s farm—

Huck's avatar

thank you claire, I definitely lucked out when that image came to me

Victoria Stoilova's avatar

So lovely; it makes the “shrine to thirst” feel closer, more immediate to the heart.

Ana Cristina Caelen's avatar

This is very lovely Huck, it brings to mind alchemical processes like sublimation and the refinement of being as the words land. Oh, the journeys!

Huck's avatar

thank you ana, well said!