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Peter Whisenant's avatar

Exquisite work.

Huck's avatar

glad you think so peter!

Joseph S. Furey's avatar

The rhymes skew natural yet there’s formal satisfaction to be had. Love it

Huck's avatar

glad you think so - I’m going for something of a ‘populist’ style with these pieces but that is a dangerous game..

John McKeown's avatar

Neat brace stanzas, very appropriate for a love poem.

Huck's avatar

indeed! glad you like it and good to hear from you!

Mark Rico's avatar

Haunting. (p.s. Minor White, what a brilliant artist.)

Robert Charboneau's avatar

Brilliant image of a window-shopper superimposed as a metaphor for separation and disconnect. It reminded me of that wild scene from Blade Runner 2049, of Joi superimposed over the girl so she could be with K.

Huck's avatar

yes! great call and glad to hear it

Kevin Patrick McCann's avatar

Love it - love the skill !!

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[cover image: Minor White]