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Robert Charboneau's avatar

The way the last two lines in the refrain read

And leave behind a curious few

Verses that come into leaf

It sounds almost as if the line had been clipped like a leaf and floated down. I really like this one.

Mark Rico's avatar

(where the shoots are coiled)

Love it.

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